What Do You Think of My Poem, and What Should I Call It?
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Tell me your opinion on this.
It might not make sense to you in some parts, but it’s one of those personal-ish kind of poems. You’ll probably be able to understand most of it, though=) It’s kinda choppy at times…I can’t seem to make it flow.
Also, what should I call it?
I am like a ceramic vase
Molded by a deceiving potter named Trust
I gave myself to you
you placed fake flowers in me
and I couldn’t tell the difference
You dropped me on the ground
And I shattered over time
I still lay in those fragments
Awaiting the day of your return
Because I can’t hire Trust to repair me now
And I know I should back away
But things have gone too far
You are my drug, and I don’t regret my addiction.
But still you leave me here
In a little pile of ceramic
Melting my heart, letting it dry, and breaking it all over again.
Will this ever end?
Bleh=/
Thanks to everyone who answers this
Oh…just so you know, I’m 13
Also, can you please star this?
Best answer:
Answer by unknown
beautiful just so beautiful! I love it!
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